Saturday, August 08, 2009

some dreams...

Some dreams, you don't want to remember,
the ones, you don't want to talk about.
There are some, better seen with your eyes tightly closed.
You don't want to open your eyes, and know, 'thats the truth'.
Some of them may be even pleasant, so much that you pretend to be sleeping.
but some, so horrible that they don't let you sleep.
In any case, it's better you keep your eyes closed,
if at all you get the choice!

5 comments:

Pratima Khadke said...

nice.. i loved the visual.. i hv a poem written in marathi for the same u hv written here :) will send u that

Siddhartha Joshi said...

the visual is very 'black-hole' and nightmarish type :), but as pratima said, even i like it.

i can recall a few scary and unforgettable dreams...some of these are just fears manifested as dreams, while some still remain unexplained in my mind.

bhavin said...

@ pratima: now please stop this 'same same' thing everywhere.
@sid: black-hole, yes it is... like those dreams which keep pulling you into some more and more unknown world.
And I feel the line 'it's better you keep your eyes closed, if at..' applies to the things happening around you in daytime also.... no matter good or the bad ones...
:)

Siddhartha Joshi said...

@pratima: poor u :)
@bhavin: i just up, thankfully slept only a little so no dreams et al.

and i wish it was possible to close your eyes to things around at will; especially when you want to, it never happens...

teamea said...

me too likes the visual! :)